Thursday, June 24, 2010

Best place in the world is....To,Mrs.Kristi--- From johncherian

from, John cherian - Home work-To, Mrs. Kristi -6/28/10

New York -
New York is the one of the best places in the United States of America. It has a lot of job opportunities,different kinds of housing, food, can meet different ethnic people and it is the gate- way of America.
New York has a lot of job opportunities than other cities.Tourism is the one of the biggest job opportunities. They have hotels, motels, entertainment centers and it has a lot of job opportunities Another one is shopping malls, small shops and street vendors. Big and large companies and service centers like hospitals and offices.Another big job opportunities are subways, trains and buses.
We can get different kinds of houses. We can get different kinds of apartments like, low income apartments to high cost apartments. The suburban area will get a low cost and high cost in houses.
We can get various kinds of transportation. It is very cheap than other cities. The subway train, we can go any where in the city and out of city by train. The subway train is cheaper than other transportation. The city bus service also can get anybody from the city to other city destinations.

We can eat different types of ethnic foods. We can eat different kinds of foods from New York. There are different types of ethnic restaurants and hotels in the New York city. So we can get different tastes of world foods from New york city.

We can meet different types of ethnic people. New York is the gateway of America. Most of the people's first arrival port is New York, so most of them live and stick in New York city.So we can see different country people and hear different languages.

So I love New York. These kinds of reasons like job opportunities, housing, transportation, tourism, food, and ethnic people. I love New york and New york is best place in the world.

1 comment:

  1. Hi John,
    When you write an essay, you don't need to number the paragraphs.

    Here are some other areas that need work:
    1. Capitalization
    2. kinds not kind (plural); types not type.
    3. gateway is one word
    4. Check for sentence fragments. I see at least one.

    Start with fixing these items and then I will look at this again.
    --K

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