1. No good topic for a college audience.
Yes rich supporting details,No logical organizations and no clear the main idea.
2. Yes, I want to understand what she is talking.
3. Hear (Sounds); sizzling, clanking, cracking
4.This sentence including the five sense. This is make, good taste for eating something.
5. Yes; He should organize the sentence and a meaning to it
6. Hear, Awilda Scarpetta wrote confusing ideas and meanings
Sunday, June 13, 2010
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Thanks for doing your homework, John!
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