Friday, July 9, 2010

Home work Chapter -3 and"Brainstorming Justice"To Mrs. Kristi-From John Cherian

Hello Mrs.Kristi - "July 4th essay I blogged and emailed Monday( 7-6-10) I told mechelli also. Please check and grade it. Thank you -John cherian

Home work - Chapter-3 -5 and 6 From John Cherian - To Mrs. Kristi-7-7-10
Page 30 and 31-5.Choose any -3:-
1.Narrowed Topic:- Credit cards use
Controlling Idea :-World wide use instead of money.
Topic Sentence:- Credit cards can use world wide instead of money.
2. N.topic:-A person you like.-Mr David Joseph's helping mind and pray
Controlling Idea :-It is very attractive for our community
Topic Sentence:- Mr. David Joseph's" helping mind and pray" is very attractive for our community.
3. N.Topic:- Overcoming Fears.
Controlling Ideas:- Try to finish all difficulty work and task.
Topic Sentence : - Any person need overcoming fears, try to finish all difficulty work and task.
4. N.T:- An act of courage
C.Id:-it is a must for difficult a situation.
T.S:- An act of courage is a must for a difficult situation.

6. 1.-Topic sentence:-P.1-The pets and animals have humanitarian mind and sense and it is mysterious and sometimes profound bound between animals and human.
2. Topic-The digital camera is has a lot of advantages than older cameras.

Justice and In Justice -Essay:-
Justice :-The justice need for all human life, without justice we cannot survive our civilization. We can see our daily life justice and injustice.Without justice we cannot say "we are civilized people". And without justice we cannot trust our friends, public and government.
For example when I worked in the auto company I trusted my friend to run the machine then I went to my break.The machine was in very good condition and ran smoothly. After my break I came back to the work station, and the machine tool was broken. My friend blamed it on me that it was my mistake the supervisor also blamed me that was my mistake. He gave verbal warning to me. Later maintenance people found that my friend fixed the wrong tool to that machine, so the tool was broken. Then supervisor told me sorry and he canceled his verbal warning. Then he gave a verbal warning to my friend.First supervisor done injustice to me, later he done it correctly.
Second example is one day I went to work which was a snowy day. I was driving my car at normal speed.I saw a car moving slowly then I noticed that was a police car. The road was in good condition the police car was moving very slowly about 20 mile per an hour, actual speed of the road was forty miles. The road was two lanes each side, I was going extremely to the right side then I wanted to go to the left line for turning left. I was going to move to the left side lane in front of the police car, and that time the police blinked his light, I stopped for the police warning, Then he told me I was going more than forty mile per an hour.Actually I was going thirty five miles per an hour and he gave me a ticket, then I told him I wanted to go to court he agreed and he told me"the court will give a date". The day came when I went to court judge asked me, and the police man, that day some policeman had too many "over speed" cases. The judge asked me and other people same policeman case (over speed) the judge released all people without fine or ticket.I understood later, before our case, judge found he was a "drunkard Policeman", so that reason Judge released all people free without a fine or ticket. We can see this type of injustice and justice in our daily life.
We need justice our daily life and improve our civilization.Without justice we cannot survive our civilization.In modern life justice is a must for all people.

1 comment:

  1. Hello John,
    Thanks for doing your homework! For last week, I wanted you to 'brainstorm' about this topic. This means just getting your thoughts down on paper. Now, for this week, turn this into a nice, easy to read essay. Make sure that you write about what justice means to you? What is it? What is it not? You have done this, just make sure that this work is very clear.

    I do like your last paragraph. You have some VERY good ideas here. Just make sure that you have your paragraphs either indented or with a space between so I don't get confused.

    Good job!
    Kristi

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